My Sapphire Sky

My Sapphire Sky

A Poem by moog-drika
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My kind of proposal. Looking for a good title.

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And when I'll kneel down, I'll make sure everyone keeps your five senses busy.
There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma. 
The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves just to serenade you. 
My sapphire sky will effuse hues from evening to caress your skin. 
The breeze will unfurl its freshly-stolen fragrance from the greens. 
And I'll be standing there, 
                 to offer my feelings,
                     all of my own senses to you, 
and ask, 
if you'd like to keep tasting my weird love forever.

© 2023 moog-drika


Author's Note

moog-drika
Might change the title if I find something better.

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I was confused by the alternating pronouns (I'll and her) in the piece. It made me wonder how many ladies we are talking about because, as it stands, at least two. But I enjoyed the read, nonetheless,

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lucky man to know he is loved strong. Lucky woman to write and extend her love deep and long.

Posted 1 Month Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Hope he understands that because he doesn't actually. 😂
But thanks so much for the positiv.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

His loss then. You are welcome Moog.
what can i say exept its great

Posted 10 Months Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

That makes me speechless.
Thanks so much :'D
You have given your darling a rainbow of love.. what could be more precious! Beautiful words, beautiful gift


Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Aww thanks so much. So glad it reached you like how I wanted.
Hope he understands that too :.. read more
emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

Smiling, don't doubt that he has. Love is a winner..
moog-drika

1 Month Ago

It sure is :D
Beautiful lines. Touched my heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much. The compliment touched my heart too :'D
There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma.

A lovely image here,it portrays deep passionate colours..

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much. Tried to turn my feelings full of colors into words.
This is emotional writing and its beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much. This really means a lot
Such a visual love story. I love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the praise. Means a lot.:D
The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves."
This made me think. Does the ocean always play the same song?
Good poem. Enjoyed the read. tyfs


Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Glad to know it made you think something.
Seeing the ocean as a master of improvisation, I d.. read more

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Added on February 6, 2023
Last Updated on July 23, 2023

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