My Sapphire Sky

My kind of proposal. Looking for a good title.

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And when I'll kneel down, I'll make sure everyone keeps your five senses busy.

There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma. 

The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves just to serenade you. 

My sapphire sky will effuse hues from evening to caress your skin. 

The breeze will unfurl its freshly-stolen fragrance from the greens. 

And I'll be standing there, 

                 to offer my feelings,

                     all of my own senses to you, 

and ask, 

if you'd like to keep tasting my weird love forever.

Author's Note

Might change the title if I find something better.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I was confused by the alternating pronouns (I'll and her) in the piece. It made me wonder how many ladies we are talking about because, as it stands, at least two. But I enjoyed the read, nonetheless,

[Sami Khalil]

Lucky man to know he is loved strong. Lucky woman to write and extend her love deep and long.

[moog-drika]

Hope he understands that because he doesn't actually. 😂
But thanks so much for the positive words. *Hearts*

[Sami Khalil]

His loss then. You are welcome Moog.

[Wyrn Tiger]

what can i say exept its great

[moog-drika]

That makes me speechless.
Thanks so much :'D

[emmajoygreen]

You have given your darling a rainbow of love.. what could be more precious! Beautiful words, beautiful gift

[moog-drika]

Aww thanks so much. So glad it reached you like how I wanted.
Hope he understands that too :'D
*Hearts*

[emmajoygreen]

Smiling, don't doubt that he has. Love is a winner..

[moog-drika]

It sure is :D

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful lines. Touched my heart.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much. The compliment touched my heart too :'D

[Stella Armour]

There will be the last bit of daylight to show you her most passionate panaroma.

A lovely image here,it portrays deep passionate colours..

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much. Tried to turn my feelings full of colors into words.

[duff]

This is emotional writing and its beautiful.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much. This really means a lot

[Ken Simm.]

Such a visual love story. I love it.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. Means a lot.:D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The sea will be playing your favorite susurration of waves."
This made me think. Does the ocean always play the same song?
Good poem. Enjoyed the read. tyfs

[moog-drika]

Glad to know it made you think something.
Seeing the ocean as a master of improvisation, I don't think it plays the same song. Rather its track changes with every tide and wave.
Thanks so much for the positive words.:D