Airglow

After a looooooong time.

My insomnia has got up early tonight.

It’s zero dark hundred now

floating across the cadence of tangle. 

While the aurora prepares to nourish the profile,

I take a chance to sense the mirage extracted from its maxim. 

Appetizing it is. 

Simultaneously, 

the navy starts to fade itself slightly

and invites cyanic steam to float.

All the sedate dots keep blinking

until my insomnia falls asleep.. 

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful writing. Enjoyed reading 🙂

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much 😁

[Mk.t.g]

"All the sedate dots keep blinking
until my insomnia falls asleep.."
Deep and emotional words, Mugdha! Really hit me hard! Thanks for sharing!
Mk.t.g

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the comment. Means a lot.

[Mk.t.g]

You're Welcome, Mughda!

[Brad Dehler]

I like this a lot, especially the concept of the insomnia separate from the sufferer. It definitely is not the choice of the sufferer thusly it can be divided. Nicely done

[moog-drika]

Exactly. At least it's not my choice, the sufferer, though I'm a night person. Kind of weird.
Thanks a lot for the comment.

[Kaye]

A very interesting write here, nicely said

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much. *Hearts*

[Ken e Bujold]

read warmed up and thought ok let's read another and what do I discover? another gem. Absolutely love "it's zero dark hundred now" midnight's never sounded quite so well put before. think I'll go read another

[moog-drika]

Okay this made me speechless now.
Thanks so much for all these words. I think I spent half of my life with midnight, hence, perhaps I understand how to describe it.

[The Unknown Sith]

Very nice flow...I liked it.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much. Means a lot.

[Robert Haigh]

As coincidence (or fate) would have it, I have just posted a poem about insomnia, and then the first poem I read is this one of yours, about insomnia! Many times I have stared into the night sky, with all its beauty and wonder. But when you are tired you just want to sleep! So, yes, I can relate to this poem!

[moog-drika]

Read yours! I guess we have the same traits with different traits. Irony.

[Lisasview]

Interesting poem with very interesting thoughts.Liked it...Makes one think and that is always so good.
Thank you for sharing,
Lisa 7:30, in Spain

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much. It really means a lot.

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
You are most welcome,
Lisa

[Sami Khalil]

Your poem is glowing in the air. A natural phenomenon???

[moog-drika]

Haha trying to make it glow as much as I can. I'm planning to shoot a new piece up in the air soon. I don't know when my writers block phase will be over. T_T

[moog-drika]

Sorry if this frequent highlight of my old poetry bothers you. :(

[Sami Khalil]

NOT ALL ALL. I like to joke with you. I love it...

[moog-drika]

Haha that you can do. :'D

[Sami Khalil]

:).............................

[KAREN]

Enjoyable read, and relatable!

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much ❤️

[KAREN]

You're welcome!