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Cyclone turns rosy

as halo drowns in ardent serenity.

Both the doubt and mettle bargain

for making a change.

Renewal happens; a dash.

Serenity drowns in halo

as it savors classy cyclone.

Situation cycles and laughs.

Reviews

[Kari Rakitan]

This poem makes me think of how life involves constant change. It is cyclical, and we often find ourselves back at the place we started, but our cycles also make an impact on the world around us. Sometimes, we get so caught up in our own cycles that we don't see the impact we have on others. We need our cycles (sleep, eating, breathing) to survive, but we also have the power to decide which direction our cycles take us.

[moog-drika]

This is soooo true and relatable. Such cyclone makes us keep cycling around our own system and we feel nothing but trapped in it.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. They added a very vivid meaning to the piece to think about. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[likhon]

Both grief and joy are impermanent in life. A little humor can be really handy in going through all of it

[moog-drika]

Absolutely! Couldn't agree more. Life's a rollercoaster, full of ups and downs. And a sprinkle of humor can definitely make the ride a bit smoother.
Thanks for the interpretation. Means a lot :D

[Arundass TP]

A good poem presenting changes and changes going on.

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much.

[The dark Hydra]

Oh my f*****g lord you couldn't have put a little more effort into this garbage peace

[moog-drika]

No. I love to be lazy. :)
"Peaceout!"

[Unspoken poet]

life changes constantly, this is a wonderful write

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the interpretation, Means a lot :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

he entire poem is like this massive paradox of contrasting thoughts whirling through our minds as we read.
"Doubt and mettle bargain/ for making a change"
i like the oxymoron "classy cyclone" with great alliteration to boot.
I think we all have to laugh in life...the good and bad will happen in cycles...
j.

[moog-drika]

I think this is how life is, full of paradox and oxymoron. Tried to depict a bit through the write. So glad to have your interpretation on my piece. I too think laughing can make 'passing the cyclone phase' easier.
Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write :D

[Just Kim]

This is a really good write, I enjoyed this write. makes me think of life

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch for the praise. I feel the same sometimes. :D

[light and ashes]

I love your choice of words! Well done! You really are one of the most unique writers!

[moog-drika]

Ahh thank you so much for such a big compliment. I love your thoughts too, they are beautiful.

[NotUsinganymore]

A unique poem about the circle of things, I guess no one ever learns and everything happens over and over.

[moog-drika]

That's what the nature of nature is. Thank you so much for sharing your thought.

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome!

[Lorry]

Whenever you see a cyclone from the angle pictured, it look so pretty and looks like its madeof fluff... Intil itsoveryourhead and trying to priseit from your neck.
Renewal does happen like that, Ma Nature doesn't mess about with quotesand schedules, she just recycles the lot and lets us start again, oblivious to the fact it could have bern her warning, maybe even her final one before all our necks go pop next time.
😀

[moog-drika]

Wow! this interpretation makes the write even more meaningful. It gives me a clear picture of what I was feeling which was kinda blurred till I read yours.
I agree with every word you have put down here. Yet we will never realize which one is the golden opportunity and which one is her final warning.
Thank you so much for such a detailed write. Means a lot.

[Lorry]

Welcome 😀

[Papaya]

Almost feels like the circle of life. Change/ death / destruction are all necessary for rebuilding and evolving.

[moog-drika]

True. it's like destruction happens for inception and vice versa.
Thanks a bunch for sharing your thoughts.