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Cyclone turns rosy

as halo drowns in ardent serenity.

Both the doubt and mettle bargain

for making a change.

Renewal happens; a dash.

Serenity drowns in halo

as it savors classy cyclone.

Situation cycles and laughs.

Reviews

[Kari Rakitan]

This poem makes me think of how life involves constant change. It is cyclical, and we often find ourselves back at the place we started, but our cycles also make an impact on the world around us. Sometimes, we get so caught up in our own cycles that we don't see the impact we have on others. We need our cycles (sleep, eating, breathing) to survive, but we also have the power to decide which direction our cycles take us.

[moog-drika]

This is soooo true and relatable. Such cyclone makes us keep cycling around our own system and we feel nothing but trapped in it.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. They added a very vivid meaning to the piece to think about. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[barleygirl]

Your poem is a powerful depiction of why it's mostly not worth it to me, to engage in political discussions these days. The ways that people react to things is so chaotic, it's like a cyclone & impossible to NOT get tangled up in circular logic based on emotional venting more than the reality of various situations. Reading this poem makes me feel the same way I feel when I'm done trying to follow the various pow-wow's that happen on social media . . . I'm so tangled up, I decide to go write a poem about the moon instead of trying to pin down any lucidity from within the swirling maelstrom! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

So true! This poem is actually a result of cyclone's visit to my mind. That's why I feel so tangled up. I guess I too need to write about something harmony to calm my mind down. Thanks so much for taking a ride and sharing your thoughts about the piece. Means a lot.

[Robert Trakofler]

let the cyclones roll dear Moog otherwise I would be stuck in a bunch of reflections in complacency what a boring bunny i would be:)

[moog-drika]

hahahaha sure! commanding cyclones to keep on rolling. I can't let you become boring. :D
thanks so much for taking a ride :D

[Lale]

This poem is indeed chaotic, but life has never been otherwise. I liked the metaphoric use of the cyclone; it represents the transformations we go through every once in a while. The last line confuses me, I can't tell whether you're taking or loosing control. Awesome write. Thank you for sharing.

[moog-drika]

wrote it when cyclone was wandering around my head. so chaos had to happen. haha but thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. they give a light to my write. thanks so much :'D

[Lale]

Thank YOU for sharing

[emmajoy]

Never has discussion, debate, exchange of opinions been put so extravagantly... true language shown... and if there's success between combatants then.. good going as well as well as fine writing, moog-drika !

[moog-drika]

I wasn't actually sure about the way I expressed it because it's like a scribble. but your review gives me a relief. thank you so much for the positive words. Means a lot

[emmajoy]

Exciting words, extravagant words, language wins all the time.. unless one scribbles like me! :)

[moog-drika]

I don't agree. your scribbles win all the time. come on! they at least manage to make me get lost in them.

[emmajoy]

LAUGHING.. that's the best review I've ever had: a laugh in return for a few joined up letters is a true compliment! Thank you. :)

[moog-drika]

My pleasure! I really love your write. :D