Pretty misty

another careless write

One does not simply ripple the hue,
with summer dew.
Yet fusing into the splash of humanity,
it scores high.

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

impactful write... beginning always remains crucial in random pieces and this one has got the start.. Keep writing !

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much for the compliment. It means a lot :D

[Robert Trakofler]

The collective starts with a ripple from a dew drop and forms into ocean waves of splendor:) I really find this image so intriguing in your poem:) and the poems image is also rather intriguing as well:) nicely penned Moog drika melody maker

[moog-drika]

And I find the image really intriguing in your interpretation. It makes me think that I actually make melody. Haha thanks so much Bad Bunny for your beautiful summary.

[Chris Shaw]

I saw morning dew on a red rose. The intense deep red was enhanced by the wetness. My red rose which is called Dublin Bay is out in bloom at the moment. I bought it many years ago after a trip to Ireland with my husband. That's where your words took me moog-drika. Through nostalgic mists to a romantic place.

Chris

[moog-drika]

I think that's the specialty of morning dew. It can enrich the color of anything it touches. Makes the nature look new, gives people or couples the chance to enjoy themselves while looking at the view. Ahh, your interpretation took me somewhere too, which is undefinable. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words my friend. You left the reader with something to think about. Color, is more important than we know. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. It's indeed important because it gives us better and enhanced vision.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet and you are welcome.

[light and ashes]

I'm a little jealous of the effortless skill of your "careless writes," because they are also phenomenal writes, nicely done as always, my friend.

[moog-drika]

Awww sweety! You have your own unique way of expressing your thoughts. They look simple outside but hold very deep meaning that make the write more colorful. Thank you so much for all the positive words my friend! It means a lot.

[light and ashes]

You are welcome! Thank you so much!

[Unspoken poet]

This is wonderful, much enjoyed this write

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much ❤️

[Unspoken poet]

not a problem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mornings are awakenings...as the dew burns off, we make waves in a sun that shines on all of us together alone.
j.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for your beautiful interpretation. Mornings also kindle hope in us so we don't stay depressed 24/7