Pretty misty

another careless write

One does not simply ripple the hue,
with summer dew.
Yet fusing into the splash of humanity,
it scores high.

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

Interesting piece, I liked the words you used to describe it.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. Means a lot :D

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome.

[Gaurav]

The landscape of colors and most importantly perfectly woven words into existence..

[moog-drika]

How are you :D
Thank you so much for taking a ride to the write and putting your thoughts down. So glad to have you here.

[Gaurav]

I am good..how are you?

[moog-drika]

I don't know actually. Trying to figure out. :3

[Gaurav]

That's where everyone is..in unknown..so you are very honest

[emmajoy]

With just a few words you've created your very own landscape and - beautiful it is, too, moog-drika.

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch for taking a ride to my write. So glad to have you here. And thanks again for the praise. Means a lot.

[emmajoy]

It's meant, i don't pretend! :)

[moog-drika]

I know! lots of love

[emmajoy]

Think I might be tired now.. going to try to sleep, yet again.... ...

[wordman]

so you just have to get out there and change the world to make a big wave

[moog-drika]

If I try doing it, the virus will make a big wave crashing me to I dont know where :3

[wordman]

can`t be afraid of life

[Neville]

Pretty misty just about say's it all .. a high scoring little four liner.. top marks my friend :)

[moog-drika]

It really makes me feel uplifted whenever I get a top mark in something. Thank you so much. So glad you like it. :D

[Neville]

pleasures all mine..

[Just Kim]

so very well written in such a few amazing words

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much for going through my writes. Really glad you like them. :D

[Just Kim]

not a problem

[¿]

You saw Elsa from frozen and how she just swirls her hand just once and a huge castle builds up on its own? You play like that with words😅 take it however but this piece is reflecting the time when people try to break the surface tension of my peace and it takes a lot of work for them.
Great little relaxing morning read, though I have no work for whole day!

[moog-drika]

Awww sweety you're very kind that makes you say this. I wish to be like Elsa in the world of poetry but I don't know if I could ever be like her. Thanks so much for all the positive words and praises as they help me feel charged up.

[¿]

You're welcome then, my pleasure entirely!😌

[barleygirl]

I envy you the carelessness of throwing down words with such freedom & lack of care (in contrast to my over-manicured s**t!) This is so damn good, I feel like putting this on a meme in Photoshop, picking some art to show it off on FB! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

Oh dear, that's really kind of you which makes you say that. Thank you so much for the compliment. It makes me so glad that you like it.
To be frank, I am giving you all the right to do whatever you want with this piece. I'll rather be more glad, trust me! :D
*HUGS* and *LOTS OF LOVE*

[AJNJ]

"fusing into the splash of humanity'
Just beautiful! Loved it absolutely.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the compliment. It means a lot. :D

[AJNJ]

I'm sorry I havent come back on that poem we discussed the other day. Got busy with work and then my own writing but please know that your imagery is excellent and you're doing very fine. Please keep at it and it will only get better with time. You have what it takes.

[moog-drika]

it's absolutely okay. All these positive words help keep me motivated. They push me more and make me want to get better and better.

[AJNJ]

And you will...It will not just get better, it will get beautiful. All the best!

[Leslie Philibert]

Not careless. A thought provoker, that made me think about your poem, this will stay with me this evening as I watch the rain in my garden. Wherever you are, I hope you are fine.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. So glad it managed to take you to its world.
And yes I'm fine. Hope you all stay safe.