When murk shines bright

When murk shines bright

A Poem by moog-drika
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I don't know why I love this write so much

"

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The sunlight chirped again 

as it polished the horizon.

It tried peeping through an abyss,

but unfortunately, 

it tipped over.

 

There was a gorgeous nebula

that composed the whole scenario,

with a clamor.


It was all planned.

© 2020 moog-drika


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This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

4 Years Ago

I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it hel.. read more



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So visual is this write moog-drika. . I have a sunset in my head reading these lines. An explosion of brightness just before the sun slips below the horizon for the night.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

4 Years Ago

This is such a beautiful interpretation perfectly enhancing the saturation of the view it shows. I m.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Imagination can help us a great deal, especially in dark times.
moog-drika

4 Years Ago

So true! It does help. :'D
I must admit I’m a bit confused. I haven’t been keeping up with poetry lately perhaps you could clue me in on what you were thinking when you wrote this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Hahhaa it's okay. I usually dont explain my poetry because I think that kills its essence. I rathet .. read more
Almost a fusion and it displays with beauty of the nature... nicely framed,,, Keep writing !

Posted 4 Years Ago


moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your interpretation. Means a lot. :D
i guess they still exist ,a mistaken beauty

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

learn from me,lol i don`t know anything about writing
moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Hahaha nais sarcasm!
 wordman

4 Years Ago

no,not sarcasm ,humble
I enjoyed the poem too. The poem danced to perfect ending. You allowed the reader to see the miracle too. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your interpretation! It means a lot!
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

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