This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it hel.. read moreI always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it helps expand my thoughts. So you pouring your interpretation on my write is nothing but a bliss for me. Thank you so much for that as well as for the praise. Hope I keep pleasing you like this through my write.
Hugs
In the grand nature of things, what happens and why happens are questions that are craved by creatives since the dawn of big bang..it excites you too...nice read
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
This is so true. The mystery of the universe is something that can never quench your thirst. Thanks .. read moreThis is so true. The mystery of the universe is something that can never quench your thirst. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
Our hopes lift at the sight of a new dawn, wondering if this will be a good day, Hope, luck and wishful thinking bring us infinite possibilities, but the dice have been rolled and all we can do is wait with baited breath and see what will be play out.
Perhaps at dusk we should review and be thankful it wasn't any worse 😀
I like this write too. No anger, just acceptance that we do have a say, just not as big a say as we think.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
This review actually helped me understand my own piece in different way. These 3 factors, hope, luck.. read moreThis review actually helped me understand my own piece in different way. These 3 factors, hope, luck and wishful do bring infinite possibilities, but there are some invisible players that make the game more unpredictable and us get confused. I guess that's why it triggers us to opt for the saying 'go with the flow.'
However, thank you so much for your
thought-provoking review. Means a lot :D
the vivid personification makes this so creative and alive.
You take a vision of nature and stamp it on our memories.
and i think that WAS the poet's plan.
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
These words really made my day. Thank you so much for taking a ride to my write and thank you so muc.. read moreThese words really made my day. Thank you so much for taking a ride to my write and thank you so much for the praise. Now I started feeling that it could be the poet's plan. :D
This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it hel.. read moreI always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it helps expand my thoughts. So you pouring your interpretation on my write is nothing but a bliss for me. Thank you so much for that as well as for the praise. Hope I keep pleasing you like this through my write.
Hugs
you can never trust a nebula Moog they are shifty characters! one day all sparkly and inviting the next eating up your chasms and filling up your voids with fresh shiny topsoil:/ yes they are sneaky sneaky sneaky
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4 Years Ago
hahahaahaha I never laughed so hard by reading an interpretation that too of my poetry!!
Yes,.. read morehahahaahaha I never laughed so hard by reading an interpretation that too of my poetry!!
Yes, I agree. They have different personalities and we can never know what goes on in their mind. Such a universal player!
I really loved how you literally explained the picture my piece tried to show. It was soooo the best. hahaha
Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words.
I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..