Indigo

Indigo

A Poem by moog-drika
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I don't know why I love playing with the sky so much :3

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The sky was caramelized,

to produce a discerning mirage on its skin.

The breeze was crispy:

it added a fierce flavor to the scenario.

 

Mouth of that ravenous seashore was filled

with layers of licit ocean.

It was not a vanilla reflection,

it rather had the skin of tender sky.

 

I tried to make a drawing of their subtle conversation.

With a brittle heart, I sighed.

Damn! It was heavy.

© 2019 moog-drika


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Do you love to see the indigo sky? I love it when the sky seems so clear without any cloud obstacles and it feels like as if the sky reaches somewhere more higher than it is...and the blue colour of it gets deeper....but can't look at that scene for too long since it hurts my eyes and neck....but I love to gaze at that! (Being silly, no? )
I actually love the first two lines of the second stanza...who else could paint it that way like you did!....I'll tell you why i feel the oceans are really illicit, because they can and do invade any place and connect to thousands of rivers....and none can stand against them....we've let them roam so free!....
Oh you made me say so much today.... I literally thank you for writing this....
Be blessed and cool and safe and happy, always ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Umm, well are you talking about the comment or the poetry? Haha
rashmi

4 Years Ago

Poetry ofcourse 😊
moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️



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Damn! This is vivid! Truly, I love your imagination here! The sky being caramelized had this warm effect over me while reading...I love how you play with words and imagery :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


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moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Happy to hear that it stirred up your mind with a warm effect. ;)
Thanks a bunch for those po.. read more
This is awesome imagery & originality. I am mesmerized by the morning sky & I could write something different about it every day. But in all my thoughts, I never thought of using the word "caramelized" to describe the sky for example. This kind of brilliant word-crafting really sparks me to reach further in my word choices. You do an exquisite job of personifying the sea & the sky & describing their subtle conversation -- this is top-notch imagination! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


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moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Exploring others imaginations does give you a lot of benefits I think. I'm a low-key reader and I ge.. read more
Oh my moog-drika, you sure do. Hit the point of explosive, exquisite masterpieces of poetry. That is vivid, colourful, powerful and amazing. Bravo.

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moog-drika

5 Years Ago

That is extremely sweet of you hun! I am thrilled to have such a positive review and so glad you lov.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

my sheer pleasure sweetheart. Look forward to the next great read from you. hugs. Dawn.
Your posted image is fabulous. I also have a bit of a love affair with the sky and all it's moods particularly when I am at the coast. I really liked your opening stanza. All good wishes moog-drika.

Chris

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moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Coastal areas have a special factor that happens to give you all the positive vibes. If I would have.. read more
Enjoyed this. what you do well here is to present an original extended metaphor, this is written very well.

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moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for putting your thoughts about the piece. I'm extremely obliged.
the sky is gods movie screen,it tells all,shows all

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 wordman

5 Years Ago

my pleasure
likhon

5 Years Ago

That was heavy indeed! And beautiful as you are
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you are kind,thank you
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Do you love to see the indigo sky? I love it when the sky seems so clear without any cloud obstacles and it feels like as if the sky reaches somewhere more higher than it is...and the blue colour of it gets deeper....but can't look at that scene for too long since it hurts my eyes and neck....but I love to gaze at that! (Being silly, no? )
I actually love the first two lines of the second stanza...who else could paint it that way like you did!....I'll tell you why i feel the oceans are really illicit, because they can and do invade any place and connect to thousands of rivers....and none can stand against them....we've let them roam so free!....
Oh you made me say so much today.... I literally thank you for writing this....
Be blessed and cool and safe and happy, always ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Umm, well are you talking about the comment or the poetry? Haha
rashmi

4 Years Ago

Poetry ofcourse 😊
moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

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