Float into despair

Float into despair

A Poem by moog-drika

Sell your pessimism,
only if you wish to steal someone's faith. 

Brain, it's a grey human who exhales metaphors. 

Who knows!
Your loyal intent might double cross you. 

© 2019 moog-drika


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Very nice use of words. Shared some knowledge and some advice. I did like. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the compliment. It means a lot. :'D
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

A wonderful poem and you are welcome.
Hi Moog-Drika, Thank you for the Read Request. Not great on reviews, but really like, but took a few reads. Very deep thinking and I love the passion in your words. A great write, well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch for your thoughts on it. They do mean a lot to me. :'D
Wow, intent is always so grey and it may hurt. Pessimism is sometimes close to realism. Good writing and thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

I agree! And I should thank you for the review and the compliment. Happy to get some meaningful thou.. read more
Ah, that first and last line hit hard! I think there's a thin line between being pessimistic and being realistic. We often misinterpret that...
Interesting write. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

This is so true. I find myself to be that thin line haha. but loved your review. Thanks sooo much fo.. read more
sell your permission would be the first mistake,then it would all run down hill from there

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Mistake? I thought that's the only solution haha. Thanks a lot.
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome
"sell your pessimism, only if you wish to still someone's faith" I feel the same.
You conveyed your thought very well in just 5 lines.

Thanks for sharing and wishing you a great happy new year.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

and Happy New Year. :'D
Amada

5 Years Ago

New year has gone 😂😂😂
moog-drika

5 Years Ago

the effect hasn't gone. :v
I felt some exasperation here moog-drika. Pessimism can certainly drag others down. Felt to me as though you were wishing to convey a warning to someone. Happy New Year.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

I suffer from negative thoughts occasionally that takes me to a dark imagery where I end up screamin.. read more

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Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words. I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..

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