Float into despair

Sell your pessimism,

only if you wish to steal someone's faith. 

Brain, it's a grey human who exhales metaphors. 

Who knows!

Your loyal intent might double cross you. 

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

Hey Mugda i like that picture! speaking of pictures I like your new picture too:)
To speak in metaphor is to speak in the faith of others comprehension and as such I think it is actually a compliment. Of course it can be also in the form of lack of faith in your own rectitude and as such can be an insult to self. I like how you leave the brush on the painting for others to ponder and complete your lines in this very brief but filled poem

[moog-drika]

Thanking you twice, one for liking my picture, other for the interpretation. Losing faith and having pessimism are pretty much relatable that weighs you down. That's when the thought of stealing comes. Then again, there are more meanings that are hidden behind the piece which I want to understand but I fail. That's why I leave the brush for you so you can complete the piece and show me the diversity. That's one of my guilty pleasures. Thank you so much for such a beautiful review. I love your interpretations a ton.

[Unspoken poet]

Such an intriguing write here, This is so very good.
Loved your last two lines.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the praise. Lots of love :D

[likhon]

Your poems force readers to think and in a clever way you keep your poems open to interpretations!

[moog-drika]

I love to do that honestly. It helps me understand my poems because I don't get them myself. haha read moreI love to do that honestly. It helps me understand my poems because I don't get them myself. haha
Thanks a lot :D

[likhon]

You don't get them yourself?! Whoa! That's some artist right here :p

[light and ashes]

This is a clever write from a very clever girl.

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch for the compliment.

[light and ashes]

:) you're welcome

[Jibey]

The mind can indeed play tricks on us, causing self-doubt and double-vision. Those who pull down and undermine are many, caring little about the impact they have on others... and the brain is no less culpable, ranging over moods of brightness to bring clouds of obscurity and damp retreat... The metaphors tumble out, without a car in the world... but making care painful sometimes.

[barleygirl]

To me, this does not read in a poetic way, but more of a political statement, straightforward & opinionated (in a good way). I am very sick of our current politics that seem to be based on pessimism, fear, & hate. Your poem feels like a spoof on those who feed on ones living in despair. Your perspectives are so "out there" . . . with very original expression and your lessons are heartfelt (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

Being a low-key observer, I although try to show what I feel about a certain matter but then again I keep the canvas blank so that people can throw more colors and add more meanings. I would say that your interpretation has made me think of my poem in a different angle and I realize that how it makes so much sense that way. Thank you so much. I never expected all of your reviews on my writeups before taking a long break from writerscafe and leaving the site. The review means a lot to me. *hugs*

[Roger Turgeon]

Thought provoking like all of your writing. Thinking makes me uncomfortable as I embrace the obvious

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for exploring all the writes. Hope you enjoyed the imagery as it makes you uncomfortable. :'D

[Rye]

Great write, full of knowledge, very intriguing as well.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for all the positive words. Made my day! :'D

[Onlyme]

Great knowledge and wisdom held within this tight little number.

[moog-drika]

Just like how you gave me a great pleasure through this tight yet gratifying review! It extremely means a lotttt sweetheart!

[sinNsincerity]

My loyal intents always double cross me, but I don't mind.

[moog-drika]

Maybe that's life. :'D

[sinNsincerity]

'Tis indeed. But we continue to grow despite the sun setting.

[moog-drika]

Metaphors do make sense sometimes. :'D