Cascade Dreams

Underneath the sun, I rest
Watching the clouds turn into images that I wish
I could touch
I see my life in different stages
Everything  is almost  real
It seems like I can stand tall and be anything I want

The heavy sunlight hits my skin
Making me feel safe
Warmth enters my heart and meekly, I smile

I close my eyes and breath in the fresh air
Surrounded by freshly cut grass
My dreams are not so far
I feel close to home.

And as I lay there
I smile happily, as I dream

Reviews

[Ashley]

its cute

[harman kour]

Wonderful write with such vivid imagery. I loved how you painted such a tranquil and pleasant scene of nature and sought inspiration from it. Very inspiring write! :)

[R E Tree]

This has a very comforting tone and feel to it. I also think you have a clever imagination which is strongly expressed in the poem. The poem makes me feel that you make life like a fantasy or you wish it was. You would dream of a place and feel like your really there almost tricking the reader that you are actually there.

[Holly O'Brien]

The speaker seems to be motivating himself to have strong hope and faith for the dreams and gaols he wants to accomplish...very nice♥

[Dutch Jr.]

Reading this, I get a good image of a late summer afternoon, just sitting in the park, pondering. Your writing evokes a good sense of sight, and the fact that you add in the dreams, and being anything you want adds a sense of surrealism and imagination to it. Nice write.

[Ryan]

Really touching, i love the imagery i recieved form this short but sweet poem. Reminds me a lot of my other home in England.

Thankyou for bringing back such great memories.