The Devil Can Dance

Tick! Tock!
Goes the big round clock
I hid it beneath mother’s bed

Vroom! Vroom!
Off sounds the chainsaw
I left my entire family dead

Plop! Plop!
I hear the tiny blood drops
Look, you’ve spoiled my shoes

Munch! Munch!
I’m going to eat you up
The monster is out, for good

Reviews

[ashley]

Lol this made me laugh, but it was that weird - should I be laughing - laugh that doesn't sound right. I love the last stanza:
"Munch! Munch!
I’m going to eat you up
The monster is out, for good"
Great poem! :D

[Dutch Jr.]

Clever, creative approach to this poem, I like it.

[Holly O'Brien]

umm...uh oh lol....someone is a bit coco here...lol nice one! I'm curious as to what inspired this piece...i enjoyed the mix of simplicity and complexity here...but it just leaves me curious lol

[MMM]

I really really like this. The way you used the sounds makes it sound very real.

[Gheeneil]

I enjoyed the use of onomatopoeia. Keep writing.

[Ryan]

hehe i love everything to do with this poem :D

[TheKaylaPup]

Its kinda creepy in a happy way, i love it!