Breaking Dawn

NO ITS NOT ANYTHING RELATED TO TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!

*Thump Thump*

My heart pounds in my chest

*Thump Thump*

Excruciating pain wells up in my chest legs and arms

I can't breathe and I'm dizzy

oozy, wobbly

*thump thump*

Cant think, all I know is your gone.

*Thump.*

Heart rate quickens, comes to a brutal hault then starts back up again slowly after what seems like a lifetime,

*Thump*

A figure forms in my sight.

A form of beauty.

Not blocking the light.

Letting it in.

refreshing.

*thump thump.*

Quickening heart rate again only this time a good way.

*thump thump*

relief,

deep breaths take over and I see clearly.

Lust,

gasps of air

quickening heart rates,

explosions.

My heart is now pounding out of my chest,

I am alive

I am at peace

I am awake.

*Thump*

Author's Note

Please please review

Reviews

[Vivek Koshy]

"I am alive
I am at peace
I am awake."

nice description

[sarcastic]

cool dude lol ha ha ha i laughed lol jk ily sissy

[Haifa]

this is so nice, I liked it

[♥(heatherawesome..]

love it savy keep it up

[Poetic Beauty]

i like this poem. many times we have to feel thump to remind ourselves that we are still alive and have made it through another day.

[chaotic katie]

i love it wonderful emotion and imagry you are a fantastic writer

[deeps]

I like this, this is wonderful.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem has such a frantic energy. I felt as if I was being slammed around.
Your intentions were realized.

[Mary]

i like this one a lot!!! the "thumps" where cool and i thought it flowed nicely.