Rose

a simple rose can seem so plain
but when the darkness calls your name
you find something special
 that you never saw before
the petals start to crack
 the light is bursting out
 and something starts to tell you
what it’s all about the sadness
the temptations the rain pouring from your eyes
and your heart
 all around are people who care
someone amongst you who cares deeply for you
 is hidden beneath your eyes all
 you have to do is reach and and listen to them
 find faith and your heart will mend
 be patient and  youll weild friends
when life gives you pain dont soak in it
 and when you think you reached the end
 keep going strong
 cause nothing can stop you
from living your life the way you want 

Author's Note

Ok this is an old old poem of mine from when i was a littler kid so dont be too hard on it okay. PLease feel free to compare to my current works!

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

This is a beautiful and also powerful; poem love it. :):)

[Haifa]

So powerful poem really its, last few lines were so so great and all of the poem was great too. I loved it, well done.

[Mithridate]

it's very cute! and very good since you did this when you were younger

[chaotic katie]

i loved it you really described how beautiful a rose can be and to think you wrote this when you where yonger is even more amazing you are very talented great job

[GrownUpTime]

has a few gramatical mistakes. i like the bigining alot.

[Tina Kline]

This poem is very positive and hopeful. I think you did a wonderful job on this poem.

In this line I think there might be a typo, so I thought I'd point it out: be patient and youll weild friends

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the optimism in this poem. There is a light between the lines that gets lost in the journey to adulthood. That point of view is priceless. Dont let this child be forgotten.