Eternity

I am forever

I am never ending

You know me for haunting,

you know me for blessing,

I live into the beyond,

I stare into your soul

My best friend is Magick

because without her I'd have never formed

My enemy is ending,

she never looks to the future

I am forever

I am never ending I am eternity

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

This is a wonderful poem, Very short though... I love it...This poem is really powerful 2... Keep up the awesome work. :):)

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Mmmm... too cool!

I am that I am... Eternal, in my essence. A wisp, a breath, fleeting thought garnered on the wind, of evermore. The twin... to Yesterday's, Tomorrow. trapped, in that eternal now. The node Reality. Find me, present.

Delivered in Deeds decree... always

Responding... Romon in Review. This is awesome!

[princess]

i loved it fantastic job

[Haifa]

Nice poem. I like it, well done ^^

[Mithridate]

Very nice poem. short but nice :) great write

[The Water Queen]

This is short but powerful in how you describe eternity. Great poem.

[chaotic katie]

i loved this it has wonderful emotion i could really feel as if you live an eternal life but magick is spelled magic just take the k off i loved every bit of this poem
great job

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful and very beautiful. I wouldn't mind being that way, your words make this look like a wonderful condition to be in.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow! This would make a great song. It felt like I was floating in the universe.
It was on a grand scale.

[Mary]

i like this one, maybe on the last line put a coma or something between, i am never ending i am eternity. short but sweet.