Haikus!!!!!!

1.Tsunami

 

Destructive waters

Whipping past the ocean shore

birds swim and fish fly

 

 

 

2.Autumn

 

Purple red and orange

whooshing in the autumn wind

breathe in the fresh air

Author's Note

please review both!!!! thanks

Reviews

[Another Relic]

The first is really good and shows action from your words that conjure up a violent storm, enough to make fish fly.

The second gives a great feeling of autumn winds rushing fugazi through the air. I can picture walking throughthe tree lined path now wearing a sweatshirt. Ha
Enjoyed both. Well done Tara.

[Mary]

i loved both, you are really good at haikus! my fav was the tsunami, i loved the last line of it.

[Kia-chan!]

Both of these are very good! the second one makes me wish it was autumn right now. Thanks for sharing :)

[sarcastic]

wwwwwwww aaaaaaaaaaa ttttttttttt ???????????
ily

[r]

they both are cool! thanks for sharing!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I think you may have something here. I love the yin/yang feeling.
It really went well together.

[Mithridate]

i think they are both amazing. haikus are an amazing form of poetry, i suck at writing them though. you are obviously great at them!

[chaotic katie]

i love the imagry and scenery in both this was great keep writing

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very descriptive and expressive writes about both events...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sunflower

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesome and i love it and you did awesome Savy