I am

I am a hopeless romantic and a lost cause

I wonder if I'll ever be important to the world

I hear the pitter patter of the rain

I see the world in black and white

I want to be recognized for more than just my flaws

I am a hopeless romantic and a lost cause

 

I pretend not to care what others say and do

I feel an array of mixed emotions

I  touch the cool glass of my bedroom window

I worry I'll lose everything that I love

I cry for unknown painful reasons

I am a hopless romantic and a lost cause

 

I understand that my views are illogilcal

I say if wish and dream it then do it

I dream of the country sky

I try to fly but don't know why

I hope that maybe I can just stop life and press pause

I am a hopeless romantic and a lost cause

Author's Note

Hope you like this please review!!!!!!

Reviews

[sarcastic]

cool ur always lost in the head savy tissss lol ily

[princess]

i like i am . it is nice.

[Mithridate]

i love the rhyming! the passion is sweet. i am also a hopeless romantic :) great and beautiful poem

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Well i liked the way you expressed it very passionate and deep. Great job Mademoiselle

[Mary]

this was a great insight into yourself, you expressed it very nicely. i liked it a lot and it has some good imagery and i like the repetitiveness.

[chaotic katie]

i loved it it was great it had awesome imagry and the poem flowed well and it had a lot of emotion which always makes for a great poem good job savs

[Erin Lee]

i love "i am" poems. it's such a fun way to explore yourself and the feelings you are having. wtg. keep writing!

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesom awesome awesome i like it

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice poem. I felt like you wrote a song here. It was real. You told us who you are and that drives a connection. I felt that this poem was torture. It just seemed to tell me that this person is in a whole lot of pain and they want it to be over. It feels like they have abandoned all hope as a sacrifice to hit rock bottom, but they are still too strong to do so. The strength in this person seems to be a curse. You have zoomed in to amazing detail, but for some reason I cant explain, I see a bigger picture. The pain and mental stress is as real as could be. It is brutal and seems to be trying to win for once and for all. Just seems like its going to be a fail.

[Poeticpiers]

The world has need of romantics You present your thoughts in well written free form poetic prose but use repetition effectively