The Mad Hatter

Magick sand boxes-- glowing in the night,

Hand in hand watches--over eternity,

little lamb growls--sweetly in the night,

Hand in hand--We shall rise.

Crawling over the sandy shore

not much more,

what a bore.

 

Can I scream just once again

I am a friend

please come to me

eternity.

 

little lamb x3 (whispered or sang) come to me

Magick sand now please bury me

and take away what's left of me

my sanity-- has gone away-

but please don't pray, I like it here.

Where I no fear, fear at all.

Not at all.

 

I am a friend we can walk along the shore

the sandy shore and rise again,

from under it.

Release the spell walk hand in hand.

I have no plan, but that is good--

I have no plan at all.

Giggle little lamb,

growl and pretend.

I am I am,

mighty strong.

 

I rise alone I follow you,

I seek the way home no where to run,

but why would I run,

I have my peace,

under the broken building dream

And all the while I sit and smile

and watch the the magick sand boxes.

 

Author's Note

My new song ! it is kinda based off the dream Alice has in Alice in wonderland. I hope you like it! Please review!

Reviews

[Elisabeth]

That was gorgeous. It was very well written with an easy flow to it. I like that you spelt Magic the way you did makes it stand out a little bit. I look forward to reading more of your work. Some more rhyming may have been nice though
Love
Elisabeth

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

no i didnt katie If you read Ashleys review there are many different spellings og the word magick and I prefer "Magick"

[chaotic katie]

hey i love it but you spelled magic wrong

[ashley]

I really like this. It's fantastic! My only thing, and this is just me, but the word "magick" bothers me... Personally, I prefer "magic" or "magik" but not "magick". That's just me, though. I know there are probably millions of ways to spell it, so keep it if you like. Just my opinion. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this! :D