The Mad Hatter

The Mad Hatter

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

Magick sand boxes-- glowing in the night,

Hand in hand watches--over eternity,

little lamb growls--sweetly in the night,

Hand in hand--We shall rise.

Crawling over the sandy shore

not much more,

what a bore.

 

Can I scream just once again

I am a friend

please come to me

eternity.

 

little lamb x3 (whispered or sang) come to me

Magick sand now please bury me

and take away what's left of me

my sanity-- has gone away-

but please don't pray, I like it here.

Where I no fear, fear at all.

Not at all.

 

I am a friend we can walk along the shore

the sandy shore and rise again,

from under it.

Release the spell walk hand in hand.

I have no plan, but that is good--

I have no plan at all.

Giggle little lamb,

growl and pretend.

I am I am,

mighty strong.

 

I rise alone I follow you,

I seek the way home no where to run,

but why would I run,

I have my peace,

under the broken building dream

And all the while I sit and smile

and watch the the magick sand boxes.

 

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


Author's Note

Tara♥Undefined♥
My new song ! it is kinda based off the dream Alice has in Alice in wonderland. I hope you like it! Please review!

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I actually really liked this :) The repetition was great, the rhythm flowed, and well, I must like alice in wonderland ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's pretty good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow i liked it, has an awesome beat to it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love the rhythm of the song.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Before I read your note, I felt and knew it was a song from the words have some of music in my mind. Well, great job. Do you like to sing?

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love your spelling of magic. It is different and shows that the song is going to be good. Great song. I like the imagery and the thought that went into this peice. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is UHmazing and would make an even more amazing song!
Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Heyy "Girlfriend" :P

I like this very much :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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tis awesome i really liked it

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a wonderful song

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I am Savannah! Heello!!!^^ I love writing(obviously) I love to sing and dance and stuff. I like the rainy days better than sunny ones and Im crazy too. Well, Idk wat else to tell you.. more..

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