Eyes

Soul starer,

a heart crusher,

all seer,

all believer,

They see inside of you,

They see your soul,

They can take away your breath,

or leave you all alone,

tear you apart inside,

build you back up,

tease you in a pleasant way,

or break your fragile heart,

They can smile and they can cry,

They can listen,

and think and tell,

They can tell stories,

They can show your heart,

They can see inside of you,

and know who you truly are,

How you feel,

That aching feel,

They see it,

They are the most powerful thing,

They can rain,

and shine,

and control you,

and everything around them.

But most importantly,

They are a part of you.

Learn to use them well,

They are your weapon,

your lucky charm,

and they can either do good or harm.

Author's Note

I wrote this for the freedom Group and you have no idea how long Ive waited for an oportunity to turn in work about eyes. They, in my opinion, are the most beautiful and important things in the world.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a wonderful poem and it is very true about eyes. They reveal things that words and other body parts can't.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. You have given new meaning to our eyes.
I loved the descriptions.

[sarcastic]

the most important thing in the world is not eyes it is life dur ta dur!!!!
ily

[Mary]

i really like this, it could be more than about eyes...but i like the eyes concept.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Beautiful writing i thought about vampyres here and there yet other than that great work madam.

[GrownUpTime]

thats so amazing. very discriptive and heartfelt. loved it!

[Haifa]

Wow, its true when you see in person eyes you will know if he is fine or not and many things. Eyes really show many things of ourselves which we try to hide but its just showing in our eyes. Well done.

[ashley]

Lol, eyes are my favorite, too. This is fantastic, very well written. Great job!

[BELLA]

nice job

[Matthew J. Price]

good job