You Came Back

You Came Back

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

My head is spinning with uncontrollable emotion,

I fail trying to hide the sweet joy of seeing you from my face.

Your smile awakens the dusty heart in my chest,

unveiling a new coat of armor to protect its fragile binding.

I have received a new sense of remembrance,

Fresh and renewed I stand tall,

arms wrapping around your warm, inviting body while you do the same,

repeating the cycle from the very beginning,

my heart skipped a beat when I made it close to you,

I was only but a mile away,

but i saw you clearly on that hill,

awaiting my arrival,

I knew it was you,

it has always been you,

The one I could never forget,

I could never regret,

I could never get back but I still have you,

no matter where you go to,

I am yours and you are mine,

never ever leaving each other,

How I crave your presence

how I wish the embrace had never ended,

I wish you were still here with me,

so we could lie in each others arms forever.

Until the end of time.

My head was spinning with uncontrollable emotions,

and I am glad I failed to hide my smile.

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


Author's Note

Tara♥Undefined♥
This is a story about something that happened unexpectedly on my walk home from school. I ran into............. an old friend, we'll say that. ^^ but it was the first thing in months to get a pure smile out of me. Ive never felt this way b4. never been this confused and happy!

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Aww this is sweet I really love it. Though I can honestly say I hope I never run into my OLD friends for they are bad news now

Posted 14 Years Ago


very proud of u ,i only have 20 more poems instuff left,still gonna hurt u n kit kat
ily

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well If the writer is a child in school that is what they will write. This is great story. I loved it. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thank you poeticbeauty79 and Im sorry that you feel that way Tate but this is My story about me! And it just so happens that I am a child in school so I guess this fits well then doesn't it? If you dont want to read something that is childlike than dont read a childs love poems. Thats all I have to say> :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Unlike Tate here I love this poem. I guess he is lucky for he has the one he loves. You can't relate to lost love if you never have lost yours. You convey your emotions clearly. You could make it more grown up by changing words but this is your poem and I say leave it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I wish i could find something to read that wasnt about achild in school

Posted 14 Years Ago


thats awesome and i love it you did great

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so perfect. I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is honestly amazing. i love it so much

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like it so much, you did a great job on this poem so lovely. I read your note, well nice story Also its nice to see old friend big hug and big smile on face. Your heart made you to smile even if you were tying to hide your smile but its happiness , live the happy moment it doesnt come many times so dont hide your nice smile.
Very well done

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Tara♥Undefined♥

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I am Savannah! Heello!!!^^ I love writing(obviously) I love to sing and dance and stuff. I like the rainy days better than sunny ones and Im crazy too. Well, Idk wat else to tell you.. more..

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