My Twin Sister

My Twin Sister

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

My twin sister is tall and strong,

short and weak,

rough and sleek,

 

Sometimes bare and sometimes not,

showing what she's always been

thick and thin.

 

She's dainty and muscular,

 I really can't muster,

 

Her shadow stands fiercomely in the morn

and hides in fear at a nighttime storm.

 

She is me but not at all,

I am short and she is tall,

 

There's no one who ever knew,

That we are not one but two.

 

She is pink and brown and green,

but what does this really mean.

 

Sheltering me from the wind and icy rain,

as I tend to her cherries every spring,

 

Her seed sprouted when I was born,

She is my twin in one way or form,

 

She showed me light through her branches,

and her pink petals drifted around me,

 

Without her I don't know what I'd do.

If she withered away,

then I'd die too,

 

 

I swear this to you.

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


Author's Note

Tara♥Undefined♥
This poem is about a tree in case you didn't catch that. This tree sprouted the day I was born in my Grandma's backyard. Ever since I could understand that I called that tree my twin sister because we were born together and I love her more than anything. She is a cherry tree too so shes really pretty. I actually got the idea to write this and show how much I appreciate her because my Grandma cut off some of her branches and it upset me pretty bad. It may seem stupid but to me it's very important so please respect the tree!!! ^^

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i didn't get it
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Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good tara. I wish there was more to it!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderfully written nice imagery

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this poem and I had gathered from the poem that the tree had sprouted or had been planted the day you were born. This is an interesting way of talking about this tree. It also gives the poem an environmental feel.

Posted 14 Years Ago


so beautiful, well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


like this a lot and love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


I realy like this, I don't find it stupid at all. Descriptive words, always a good touch. Just the right amount of detail.

Posted 14 Years Ago


great rhyme scheme and use of oximorons. :) i really enjoyed reading it! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a wonderful poem here,
I think this is beuatiful.
I liked this alot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


savy i love it i always wanted a cherry tree they are really pretty and it is so cool that you have your own tree that grows as you do i loved the poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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