Wishing for The Memory

The stars were more beautiful tonight than ever before. They shined with surreal elegance I barely believed what I saw. The crystal ball moon glistened up above and gave me an overwhelming feeling of awe. The thoughts floating through my mind had begun to sink in deeper. Somewhere near my heart. Maybe not quite there but soon I know it will sink in deeper and reach my heart so I can feel the true sensation. Almighty and strong. You sit beside me, your hair flying in the wind as best as it can at its short length. You smile. You do not know what that smile does to me. What looking at those gorgeous eyes does to me. I can't imagine losing those beautiful things about you. Deep in you I hope it sinks in too. To your hear,t so you may understand and we can be one. What other bliss could you possibly give. except perhaps just one gentle kiss. Gentle and slow and everlasting. Fingers flowing through each other's hair. I wish i could travel back to that moment. my favorite of all memories. Until tomorrow my dearest. We will see each other once more and I will find myself, once again, in that gentle embrace.

Author's Note

A bit poetic like i guess but It is still a story and I hope you like it^^

Reviews

[E. R. Rawding]

it's very good, but it's not a short story. it's a freeverse poem, and i think it could benefit from being formatted like one :)

[sarcastic]

to long to read,butt from every ones commits its sounds wounderful ,so hows life going for u im bored idk wat to do im still going threw read requests only 30 left
ily

[Avonmomofive]

Savannah. This is a beautiful poem. It really draws you in. It makes you wish you were on the beach with your special someone.

[BELLA]

LOVED IT

[Poetic Beauty]

Another beautiful piece that reminds me of a dream

[Epic Destruction 911]

''You smile. You do not know what that smile does to me. What looking at those gorgeous eyes does to me. I can't imagine losing those beautiful things about you.''
I love those lines. It was an amzaing read, very descriptive.

[Allison]

Wow, I really like that. It totallt reminds me of me and my boyfriend :)
Nice write hun!
~Pokie

[♥(heatherawesome..]

awesomeeeeeeeeee and love it

[ashley]

Beautiful imagery. Fantastic write. :D

[Matthew J. Price]

wow this is the deepest story i have ever read, very powerful message and i felt the emotions. this is one of ur best. keep writing! :)