Questions

Pale and perfect,

with hazel, brown eyes,

Why ever did you leave me,

You said, even after that you wanted me,

but you never took me back,

 

Tell me,

Were you just playing with my head?

Trying to make me feel more for you?

To sympathize for you?

If so, you've only hurt me,

 

"Why torture me?" I ask you,

"Why torture my fragile heart?"

"I cried for nothing,

Is that what your telling me?"

 

Never tell me things like that,

My friends were right weren't they,

Maybe I should just forget in general,

but to forget the sweet love I once knew--

That is preposterous,

but what else can I do?

And if you dont know how to answer,

 then why ever did you tell me,

 that one fateful day,

that you would answer all my questions.

Author's Note

Please review. And yes this goes along with Eternal Magick and Passing notes. Im just kind of stuck on the subject so I thought Id write it all out!

Reviews

[deeps]

Wow! This is totally amazing here.
Such emotion in this. I like this alot.
You are very talented.

[chaotic katie]

wow savy vey deep i loved it

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the topic of this poem and the words you used are wonderful in this poem but the flow is a little rough.

[Levioshock]

BRAVO!

[SarahCortland]

I really like this! It's great. It had a lot of feeling in it. It reminds me that i should take my friends' opinions more often!