My Perfect Paradise

Waves ripping at the shoreline,

the feel of sand between toes,

fingers intertwining

and lips touching gently,

This is the purest of loves

the sweetest of dreams,

something that over time no one has yet to reach,

but if we try to reach this place of sweet and gentleness,

We have to be pure of heart and

wanting, for each other, bliss.

Deep as the sea as the eagles fly by,

flames of the bonfire licking at skin,

sweet smiles,

gentle kisses,

everlasting, calming breezes

all under the fold in your mind,

you can live there with someone,

someone who only cares for you,

who only you care for,

and hide away in your perfect place

forever,

and never lose you happiness again.

Author's Note

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Reviews

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I like this I thought it was quite wonderful and beautiful