Winding Darkness

Winding Darkness

 

by: Tara♥Undefined♥

　

Darkness lingers on inside,

there's nowhere to hide,

Nowhere to run,

unless you wish to step inside,

to go on along,

the dark winding path.

Whispers glide across your ears,

confirming your fears,

all through the years.

"Take me, break me, now"

you plead,

lost in the madness of

the dark winding path.

It wishes for you to suffer,

you will not die quick,

so take your pick.

The options are everlasting,

the choices are all fatal,

the all consuming wrath of the darkness

awaits your approval,

"You made this choice"

It whispers in the sharp voice,

"When you took that step toward

the dark winding path"

You don't respond,

you cannot carry on,

you are lost in the dark,

it has swallowed you whole,

into the darkness that is black as coal.

You made the choice so follow the voice into the madness of the

 

Dark

 

Winding

 

Path

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

awesoem

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a wonderful descriptive poem. It is a great poem using the topic and title for Poetry and Lyrical Challenge.

[The Official Gary B]

Love IT!

[Mary]

i really like it, very dark, Kools:)

[sarcastic]

dude thats deep (i guess , i didn't read it butt deep)

[chaotic katie]

l love it

[deeps]

This is wonderful but yet sad and hopeful all at once.
This is a brillant write, This has a wonderful flow and
excellent rhyme scheme.