Sweet Inflicting Pain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The tears are burning in my eyes,

I've lost my will to survive.

 

The knife

It slices sweet and slow,

how'd you know,

it's time to go.

 

The pain it takes it all away,

all my tears,

have gone astray.

 

Oh the pain it feels so good ,

Wish I could

make it last,

but my past,

has no history,

It's a mystery that can't be solved.

 

Oh it's sweet but wrong,

though it makes me stronger,

everyday,

but I regret it by the end of it.

 

Then the pain sinks in deep,

the blood on my lips and teeth.

 

From my wrist,

running deep,

lost my will to survive,

 

Im eaten alive,

my mind is an empty hole.

 

I am gone,

weak but strong,

when the pain goes away

I must make it go on and on.

 

Until I die.

Don't make me cry again,

or it wont end,

I will give in.

Author's Note

New song rather slow and evenescence styled what do you think. Its about an experience of mine that I'm sure you understand.

Reviews

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

Very dark. Deep.
Well expressed.
Understandable.

[Wicahpi]

deep, dark and disturbing.
well versed.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

love it alot Savy

[chaotic katie]

wow deep i love it

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

very good. alot of feeling and emotion it reminds me of how i feel

[Matthew J. Price]

this is very dark and deep into feelings, the rhymes are good, and you use complex words, its a very good song! :P

[deeps]

Very emotional write here.
But well expressed.

[Mary]

it was good