Need

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see your eyes,

glistening brightly,

the sun in the sky sees it all.

 

Deep as the ocean,

under the moonlight,

I realize that your standing tall.

 

 

And as I walk all alone on the shore,

I realize that there is so much more.

 

Chorus: I want to be you everything,

you mean so much to me,

and I feel hurt,

though I'm still breathing,

i know that it won't last much more,

I feel I'm dieing,

my soul is crying,

once more.

 

Rain on the window,

dieing to get in,

I walk to the shutters and cry,

open the window and let the rain pour in,

I want it to be free and I.

I want to lay here and die.

 

Chorus:

 

This is the end of my world,

unless you make me your girl.

Reviews

[deeps]

Well written lyrics here. Very well written

[Matthew J. Price]

but its still very good

[Matthew J. Price]

i get the whole mesage... its very good lyrics but make it longer and put a little more detail and the whole message of the song would be a whole lot deeper

[Daydreamer54]

wow! This was very depresiing, but i can feel the yearning of the guy for the girl through the lyrics.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

its a song btw new lyric of mine

[chaotic katie]

love this poem savy