Emerald Sea

The breeze makes magick on the shore,

flowing and growing with chartreuse waters,

salient, knifelike rocks line the edges

and seem to gaurd the misplaced beauty of the sea.

Dark, whispy leaves whip around in the air,

 

swaying and flowing,

Saplings dancing with such grace on the sand,

caressing the wind's gentle breeze with such pure lust and magick.

Wind whisping around each lucious branch.

 

So pure and true,

I envy your love,

for having ,forever, eachother's sweet touch,

I crave such a rush

 

I dream of you and me,

 like the wind and the trees,

 sailing away on the emerald seas.

 

Author's Note

not much to say bout this one cuz its metaphorical in parts and others not so much... its very personal to me so dont be too rough on it.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

iT has no plot really and the words you use are too big for a fourteen yr old

[♥(heatherawesome..]

awesome

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You capture your emotions within the vibrant energy of the sea's living essence. Twas a beautiful poem, filled with rich imagery and vivid feelings that were woven together smoothly.

An enjoyment to read and gaze upon!
*Hugs!* - Tara M Stone

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Thx guys

[Matthew J. Price]

awesome!

[Bette]

you did a wonderful job this! well done

[BELLA]

(loved it)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem that flows easily. It makes me feel peaceful and calm. Great write and thanks for posting in Poetry and Lyrical Challenge.

[Mary]

i really liked it...maybe you shouldn't say magick twice, i don't know you can replace it with something else, nice imagery! great write:)

[rockinmiley555]

i can really feel how personal it is from you, even though i am not in your situation which is how i like the poems i read. i really liked the last stanza. :)