Forever Doomed to Dance

Swiftly flowing chiffon brushes against your skin,
eyes close,
the sparkle of the night music rings in your ears,
twirling me into the abyss,
bright as the night,
deep as the sky,
dancing to the sweetest of tumes, all underneath the blue full moon.
Magickal boundaries surround you and I,
our eyes are still shut,
the music has died,
but the twirling shant stop,
it has only begun,
its only forever,
thats not long at all,
gliding the hilltops,
we’ll stop, never, dancing.
if my eyes were to open I’d find myself alone once more,
I dare not let go of your grasp,
I dare not open my eyes,
this dancing will not cease,
I never want to stop,
I will be with you forever,
never ending nothingness into a night,
 filled with blue moonlight,
lost in a depth of destruction I am oblivious to,
all because of you,
because of my refuse,
to let go of you,
or open up my eyes and be back home alone,
the dancing ended once more.

Author's Note

I really was more thinking I should probably make this a story. I would like to hear exactly how you feel bout this one, I want this to be my best yet, Plz review kk. ^^

Reviews

[deeps]

This is written ever so lovely.
Love the color you used.
Emotion filled write.

[maryjaneuy]

great, ;) love this one. but.. it reminds me of our prom, which i didn't have the chance to attend.. :(
keep on writing! :D

[Mary]

i really liked this one, the color was cool too,nice imagery i'm sick of saying this so stop improving this is one of your best:)

[Daydreamer54]

I love the color u typed in. I guess this poem means how it is to hold on to something and never want it to end. Ur poem was good. i liked it.

[chaotic katie]

oh my gosh i absolutly love it and thats the truth savy

[Subjective Sanity]

This is beautiful. I love the idea that as long as your eyes are closed, you will be with them. I know that feeling well. : )