The End

Life,

What is it?

I do not know.

I want to show,

I want to travel,

to see the world,

but why to go?

is it to feel,

or to make a steal,

away from here,

do you want to know?

Have I done wrong.

Do I live right?

Do I hold tight,

to what I should?

Or do I pain the world around me?

Do I make them feel sincere?

Do I make them want to hold me

or throw me off the peir.

When the sunset shines over the horizon,

I want to be sure,

that I will have my last goodbyes,

without asingle tear.

Author's Note

Just a thought What ya think!?

Reviews

[BELLA]

i loved it

[Tate Morgan]

Feed your desires and travel

[Subjective Sanity]

I think it's perfect! It shows your conscience and have one that sincere makes a beautiful person! BRAVO!!!

[~*_Michelle_*~]

This was crisp and fresh. A new read. I loved the scheme and the message was clear. Yet not boring or obvious. :) Good Job. Can't wait to hear more!

[maryjaneuy]

this made me think a lot. nice rhyming scheme. good job! :)

[chaotic katie]

love pure love once again lllllllllllllloooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee

[Mary]

liked it...Kools:)

[rockinmiley555]

haha it brings up a lot of questions about my life....