Death Whispers

Souless bodies lie cold on the floor,

lost in a home without windows or doors,

trapped in a world that is lost of all hope,

something I never felt before.

Deep in my heart I knew what I felt was true,

but I pretended I was fine.

Like my mind,

had never crept to the depth of the factors.

Like I never thought of the possibility,

the idea that you were gone.

The bodies are now purple from the cold,

though they took last breaths years ago,

I see clouds around each dark mouth as if they had been breathing,

Depth in a tunnel that i never had been in before,

lost in a tunnel.

No windows,

no doors,

Just the souless bodies on the floor.

Author's Note

What ya think!?

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

wow, this was so moving and powerful, terrific job!!

[Holly-Marie]

Such a powerful poem. Beautifully dark and wonderfully dramatic. Loved it =)

[Subjective Sanity]

Deep. You paint a very powerful image. Well done. : )

[maryjaneuy]

very deep poem. It has really an impact to every reader. by the way, nice read.
you're a great writer. :)

[E. R. Rawding]

...wow, not much i can say on this. Very subtle, very meaningful

[chaotic katie]

wow savy that was deep.... i love it