I like being lost

Pushing forward,

carry on,

into nothingness and more,

feeling hopeless as it seems,

can not be alone but no one is here for me.

 

I am lost  in a world of strangers that mean nothing to me.

I feel hopeless and carefree

 and maybe I feel happy this way.

 

Good feelings enter me. Nothing hurts more than to be,

Lost and lonely and to forget how to smile,

so I'll remember for a while how to smile,

how to love,

how to be,

free,

me!

Author's Note

what ya think its a new songggg!!

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful, such an enjoyable read.
I like this alot. good flow to it and rhyme.
Veyr well written

[BeethovenFan]

Very pleasant. It'd be nice to hear the melody to this song too; it does sound very lyrical. Well done!

[shayne]

I like the rhythm of it. I enjoyed the read :)