Savior of Insanity

Breaking of silence in the night,

a mourful sob fills the skies,

bringing even the highest of men down to their knees in awe.

 

Again,

the sob whispers into each ear softly and creeps upon them in the night,

deepening the sorrow.

 

The feel of the gentle, innocent tears streaming,

brings the rest of the world to silence and listens quietly to the cry from within the unknown.

 

Though awe struck they are,

they stay still as a stone and cry for the victim that calls to them,

they fear for her,

they fear for her life,

but do nothing to help,

they shan't dare to go into the dark, lonely night.

 

Because of their fear and unwillingful actions,

the sobs die out,

and the world is filled with noise again,

as if nothing had happened,

as if the girl was never real,

she dissappeared,

 and with her, her memory,

 

No one cares,

no one knows,

they may have feared for her once,

but now she is gone.

 

 But deep inside,

 the guilt of having never done anything

 to help would continue to grow,

 till they became mad and could do nothing to save themselves.

Author's Note

Ok I was having a deep moment in me and felt the need to write about the way the world tunes things out and pretend bad things dont happen even though they do. Dont pretend. Thats stupid. They feel for the people who hurt and their families but they just sit back and do absolutely nothing. Ugh it disgusts me.

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

I get disgusted by that too. It's good to write from your feelings, it gives your poems more meaning. Great job :]

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

I know it disgusts me too. =P But I like how you worded it though.Made it feel powerful =) good job!

[The Official Gary B]

This is really good... great job girl..

[jenn.]

Amazing, I must say. Brung forth a powerful emotion.

Fellow Writer,
Jenn.

[Mary]

i agree this is well said and well worded! This has emotion and a purpose, great job!!!!!!! :)

[Subjective Sanity]

Well said. Both the poem and the note. Very true!!!