Tell me

     How do I know that you love me? Dont look at me like that. I know that you say it. That you promise its true, but how can I know that. I want you to prove it. Prove to me that you love me truely. Kiss me and with each breath between, tell me something new.

 

 Tell me about your dreams, about your life before me. Tell me how you feel when you see my face and how you want to be with someone. Tell me why you love me. Tell me, I beg of you. If I were to die any moment now, what would you do. If I ever hurt you how would you feel?  Would you love me still? But you instead ask me the same.

 

"What  about you, would you love me still?" Silence creeps over my once moving mouth at that moment and I cry; a silent tear strolls down my cheek and you brush it away.

 

 "I love you. Always. I love the way you wipe my tears and the smell of your sweet skin." I  say  "I love runnning my fingers through your hair and seeing your smile. Most of all I love how you forgive. I love how you love me." Then I knew how you loved me without a word.

 

 Before I could speak you leaned in and kissed me. With each breath you took you told me a secret. A dream. You told me that you loved the way my eyes sparkle when I think and how bright I am. You say you love my sweetnesss and my sarcasm. You say you love how I worry(even though most days you get aggravated by it). You tell me that you love me and that you know I love you. That you never want to let me go again. Ever. That forever and always you will love me.

 

 We lay there on the sofa in the dark. Everything is silent and i look at you. Your bright blue eyes stare into my soul and unlock my heart. Lean in for one more. I think. As if you had read my mind you wrapped you arms around my waist and pulled me in for one more sweet true kiss. Then, we slowly drifted to sleep together forver. Just you and me.

 

I love you

 

Forever and Always.

 

Forever...

 

 

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

If I had to describe this story in one word, it would probably be "confusing". It's easy enough to follow for the first two paragraphs (ignoring your spelling and grammatical errors, which do pop up a bit. You end sentences with periods when they need question marks all the time), but when the other person starts talking, suddenly you're losing the reader. It becomes very hard very quickly to differentiate who the speaker is.

Once you get back to no dialogue for the last parts, you revert to the old problems. A couple of spelling and grammatical mistakes marring an otherwise well-written and sweet story. Paste this into Word, that should catch your mistakes for you.

Three and a half stars.

[Mary]

very sweet...and lovey dovey, it was kk, but not really my genre but still kools:)