Death Music

*whish*

Wind blows harshly,

spinning you out of control.

 

*cry*

Screams,first softly,

then louder in every ear.

 

*drip*

Turn your head and you'll see,

something you don't want to see.

 

*drop*

Thick, red liquid swoons 'round.

covering the walls and ceiling.

 

*gasp*

Lights begin to fade,

eyes are closing.

"No, hold on." you tell yourself.

 

*silence*

Nothing not a peep.

it'd silent and begin to flood,

flood, it's flooding with your blood.

 

*twinkle*

Hear that? That's your phone,

it's a text you cannot reach,

Your hopeless now,

your out of blood,out of breath,

and silence creeps over the car again.

 

*sirens wailing*

They are too late,

they pull your body from the car and put you in a bag.

 

*clink*

You are in a box,

a box that's locked,

and cold and silent.

 

*cries again*

In a new box,

a wooden, warm, cushiony box

people surround you,

dropping things into your coffin.

 

*laughs*

They tell your childhood

before a crowd of people you once knew.

 

*crank*

They close your wooden box,

you start to fall slowly

into a dark,

damp,

hole.

Then silence creeps over and nothing more.

Author's Note

I wrote this two days ago on paper because I was grounded but plz tell me wat you think. I made a few ajustments to the original in places that sounded a bit off to me. Plz review!!

Reviews

[Subjective Sanity]

I really like it and I think the title gives it even more depth. Death Music is a very powerful statement. Very creative!

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

y thank you Mary!

[Mary]

wow, that's creepy, but i liked it:)