Time Stops

Time Stops

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

 

Hmm...

She sits and waits

for him to arrive from the school,

 

*tick tock*

 

As she sits, she smiles remembering the plans they made,

 

*tick tock*

 

They are going to go see a movie,

 

*tick tock*

 

They are the best of friends

and are going to try going out for the first time,

She sits and waits,

still smiling.

 

*Tick tock*

 

Worry crosses over her face,

 and she starts to look out the bus window for him,

he doesn't show for a long while,

 

*tick tock*

 

She smiles wide-eyed as he walks by the bus,

as she goes to see the window to call his name she stops,

smile gone from her face and ,

a tear streaks across her pale cheek,

 

*tick tock*

 

A girl walks by his side as his arm creeps over her shoulder,

his time is up.

 

*tick... silence*

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


Author's Note

Tara♥Undefined♥
Please review. This did happened to me to answer your questions and I appreciate the sympathy. I am ok now!

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I like it. You really capture the heartbreak we girls feel at that age. You will either get over him or always keep a place in your heart for him long after you fall in love for good. Either way it's one of those experiences hat makes us who we are. : )

Posted 14 Years Ago


that's so sad! i hope that didn't happen to you! you should take the apostrophe out of wait's and make it just plain old waits. ;-) great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, i really liked this!!! It was sad and made me want to punch the guy:) This is one of my favs of yours!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2010
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I am Savannah! Heello!!!^^ I love writing(obviously) I love to sing and dance and stuff. I like the rainy days better than sunny ones and Im crazy too. Well, Idk wat else to tell you.. more..

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