Alive

Alive

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

You make me feel alive,

you make me feel inside,

I am broken but now words are left unspoken,

reach out for me feel the sun,

 feel the wind around you.

I Feel you in my arms and you make me feel like I can fly.

 

Break through the barrier and try to colide with emotions,

scream at your pain for coming near and hurting you.

Stand strong, don't break down under.

Feel the way you make me feel.

Deep down inside.

You make me feel... alive.

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


Author's Note

Tara♥Undefined♥
My first offlicially published song I really hope you like it. PLEASE tell me what you think.

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Nice job! :)

Good luck in my contest. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's very well written & enjoyable. Also, very cute.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Kools, who is this about?^^ you are going to tell me right!?! i thought it was good!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 3, 2010
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Tara♥Undefined♥
Tara♥Undefined♥

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I am Savannah! Heello!!!^^ I love writing(obviously) I love to sing and dance and stuff. I like the rainy days better than sunny ones and Im crazy too. Well, Idk wat else to tell you.. more..

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