It's Your Turn...

you made my heart melt the first time I met you
you made my world change its direction

This is all very true..

You opened my eyes

and for the first time in a long time feel joy

you were a nice sweet boy 

but that was years ago
then you made me realize
..I now know there is no need to live in the past

 I'm not anymore

you seem to think you're that young boy still

but Its time, its YOUR time
you need to grow up

we are adults now

no need to be like little kids

I do love you and dont ever forget it
don't ever say I don't
this is for your own good

there is a line that needs to be drawn

between boys and men

you need to learn

that I don't date little boys

I'm growing up

and its now your turn too.

Reviews

[Jazmen]

you have the idea, just need a better flow in my opinion. I always remember that revision can be (and usually is) key to a great piece.. you got this.