which way should I go?

A fork in the road,

which way should I go?

one way leading to God's humble abode,

the other leads to my life that I use to know.

I remember the accident well,

it was awfully fast, yet surprisingly thrilling.

The car was spinning so much that I wanted to yell,

for I was being taken unwilling.

But now that I am here between life & death,

I'm not sure which to choose.

I am about to run out of breath,

and that is what I'm afraid to lose.

I know I will be missed by my friends and family that in my heart I hold so dear.

I don't want to leave but I also want to see whats over there.

I hope that God will make this all clear

for this is more than I can possibly bare.

I hear prayers from the people I love asking you to bring me back

for if I leave it would cause them all great woe.

But still the answer to my question is what I lack.

Which way should I go?

Author's Note

...for my friend that is in the hospital fighting for her life.

Reviews

[Celeste]

Hey! This is some deep writing. I could feel the struggle of the character as he decides which path to take. I'm sorry to hear about your friend, by the way. :c It amazes me how you symbolized her choices to that of a fork in the road. Brilliant, really!

This reminds me a bit of The Road Not Taken in such a way that it was about how the decisions you make can affect your life.

Great job. Keep writing!