When I liked you.

When I liked you.

A Poem by m0niqu3_
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Having my heart broken didn't break my willingness to push through the tears and write :)

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When I met you,
I liked you.

When I liked you,
I loved you.

When I loved you,

I let you.

When I let you,

You left me.

© 2022 m0niqu3_


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m0niqu3_
Whatever you want to write here <3

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I echo the sentiments of the other reviewers here in that I hope the act of writing might have provided some help for you. I know that frequently that's how it works for me at least, but there is also so much that must simply be left to time. I especially liked the pacing of this and how you kept up the pattern of 'When I ___, I _____ed' until the end where you turned it around. Very poignant. It's a good write, but unfortunate you had to experience it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I echo the sentiments of the other reviewers here in that I hope the act of writing might have provided some help for you. I know that frequently that's how it works for me at least, but there is also so much that must simply be left to time. I especially liked the pacing of this and how you kept up the pattern of 'When I ___, I _____ed' until the end where you turned it around. Very poignant. It's a good write, but unfortunate you had to experience it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope the writing of it helped. I hope you feel valued and validated.
Now let it go- he isn't worth the pain you feel.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Spare wording, but it tells it all. Write it off to one of life's lessons.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2022
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