Call Me Baby

Call me baby again

I like how it sounds coming from your mouth

Forget that I’m not yours and this is false

Comfort and closeness

Just don’t think about it

And call me baby again

Reviews

[EMF]

I have to admit, I had to look at the reviews to see how many people would call you Baby. Quite a few. But I don't know about it just being a 'decent' poem. I loved it. It has a real sweet harsh edge to it. Enough aggression to carry through any comment, especially hypocracy and falsity. In fact the more I read it, the more I like. Thank you for posting this. Great read for the morning

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Sometimes even a lie is comforting.
I can relate to that need.

[HadesRising]

I was thinking about that song don't call me baby, as I was reading this. Very good though.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I could vision the place and the words spoken. Sweet words are needed. Even if they are just loaned. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one. Tempting and so good.
Coyote

[Lilly]

(Haha I have a poem posted here that is the opposite of this - telling someone to not call them 'baby').
Funny how one word can evoke such different responses or emotions depending on the situation, your relationship to or feelings toward the person saying it.
This is a great poem you have here :)

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That's smoking!!!!! Awesome:)

[Eagle Cruagh]

I tried to find a moral , the mystique, direction
and tried again, but
You win, Baby. You can call it false comfort,
closeness , but I will have to take your advice
in the end---- and just Baby you this once.
---- John

[Tate Morgan]

LOL well that sure tells the ale of humanity and the sexes

[Antonio Valentino]

Okay now listen here baby and listen here good... lol

funny, that happens to be my favorite endearment to call that special loved one.

Loved this, this was great!
Antonio

[TheFemininePad]

This poem is alittle decent. It's not a great poem, but it is decent. I just don't feel your emotions or experiences powering this written piece. It's sassy which is different that what I am use to reading. A few suggestions to improve the poem would be to add a few more stanzas. Write more of your emotions into this poetry.