Stirring Me Slowly

Stirring Me Slowly

A Poem by Monday Parker

I’m starting to float on your words

Your images arrest my thoughts

Wandering

I feel the sparkle of your lips

Of our passion

The heat in our kiss

Flaming

Storming my intelligence with your face

Striking sapphire

Tantalizing

Tempting precision

Shaking my soul

Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me

In the whirlwind of your shadow

In the elegance of your poetic hands

Of your supple touch

In the glint of your eyes as you gaze over me

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Monday Parker


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Fabulous, sensual and passionate with tantalizing imagery!
"Observe how easy you stir me / In the whirlwind of your shadow"... I love it!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


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this is such an intimately wonderful poem:-)


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An exquisite piece tactfully done.
I truly enjoy this write, beautifully
enchanting….



Posted 14 Years Ago


Stunning. Your feminine power bathes this lovely poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


maybe you should have named that "Stir me madly" .. i like the imagery you use with the dogwood leaves ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


intense.
....so much can be
said in a gaze--


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Monday Parker
Monday Parker

Sacramento, CA



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