Stirring Me Slowly

I’m starting to float on your words

Your images arrest my thoughts

Wandering

I feel the sparkle of your lips

Of our passion

The heat in our kiss

Flaming

Storming my intelligence with your face

Striking sapphire

Tantalizing

Tempting precision

Shaking my soul

Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me

In the whirlwind of your shadow

In the elegance of your poetic hands

Of your supple touch

In the glint of your eyes as you gaze over me

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me"

Excellent. You have a gift with words.

[Ice QueenJen]

very nicely written Monday, subtle and elegant!

[GTVile]

This is broken up very nicely. You keep it flowing enough to make it sound nice and short enough to make it re-readable. You also use very POETIC imagery which escapes most "poets" so that's also very good. I would say this is a very strong piece. I like it very much and will be "favorite-ing" it.

[Sean M. Addams]

love the imagery in this .. beautifully done ..overall I thought this was a very impressive write ..nice job..

[Tommy]

And you have stirred my emotions true...I love the sensual feel, and the subtle devouring of passion's overwhelming feel...this is a tasteful delight of diction displayed in a most tantalizing vision of love...

Fantastic Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Ed Hart]

never trust a poet, especially a good one

[Tate Morgan]

AHHH Love so beautiful to see and so desirable to feel

[Blakprinze (Vincent J.)]

Quote:
Observe how easy you stir me
In the whirlwind of your shadow
In the elegance of your poetic hands

This was a wonderful poem. The above quoted part brought a smile to my face. I had to say it out loud.

Beautiful.

[TheFemininePad]

Amazingly written. A great poem. The imagery was especially wonderful. I don't see how this poem could use any improvement. You manage to convey your feelings with this fantastic poem.

[solo2be]

Great imagery, shows true passion. I love the line "Observe how easy you stir me."It's amazing how well this flows.