Sleep Gauze

Sleep Gauze

A Poem by Angelheaded Hipster
"

The butterfly takes a nap

"
Did I talk in my sleep?
I dreamt so vivid...

The words flowed
out of me, I repeated
them against your
smile, a whisper
and I was scared
to open up so honestly
in my nakedness,
under your gaze, your eyes
peering into, through
the thoughts that jangled
around in my head.

You do that
You do this to me
You don't have to try

"Protection against werewolves,
vampires, and other boys"

It weighs heavy against
my skin, I know it's there
along with the dotted line
trail you marked along
the way.

Is it worth the wait?
Was it worth the time
gone by, unknowing what
we two had been through?

Yes
Yes

I'm falling
I'm trying not to
but like the spider said to the fly
"come into my parlor"
I did.
I entered, and became
ensnared in the words, the kisses,
the sliver strands of caresses

You've caught me
off my guard, with the walls
down, I invited you
into my world.

Don't break me.

© 2010 Angelheaded Hipster


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Very nice. Haven't read you in awhile and this was refreshing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Surreal! Excellent piece :) I love it:) Poppy xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I used to get a lot of info from a GF
sleep-talker and so did her boyfriend.
Wowsies!

Killer title and a great poem.

Live for love and take the consequences
with as much grace as you can muster.

(if anyone hurts you just give me their address)

Hugs, Jack

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful and sweet, this is totally dreamy! Wonderful writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


:) My poem of the day

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amber this is great. A vulnerable look at love. I love the spider and the fly analogy. Wow, it is a scary, but awe inspiring thought to love again isn't it?
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely adore this! Someday I can only hope I can write this well. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know what, you're a great story teller Amber!
I thoroughly enjoyed this!

Great writing!
Antonio

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Amber....my friends call me.....Amber, GA



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