Triangular Angel Kisses

the butterfly has spots

There's a spot right
next to the eye,
at the outside, where
three freckles live
You've no idea how
charming that is, do you?

Noticed them over my
beer that was better
than Guinness
(I know!!)
when you said something
that made me laugh
(No, I dont remember the words)
and look up, and there
they were

Upon closer inspection,
I opened my eyes when
you kissed me,
I found them more
charming than before

I think it was a mix
of sun, street, and
my poetic musings
of how normal it all felt.

Reviews

[Mark]

I love that spot near the eye

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The first part bout the freckle was charming... for to me those little imperfections are where the true beauty of someone lies... beautiful set up scenario, I just adored the ending

[Nicolas Drago]

Good one. "a mix of sun, street, and my poetic musings..." -I like that part especially.