Brillo Pad Mind Scrub

Now Im trying to erase the musings....

Just now

 

well, then, a second ago...

nevermind, the time of it

isn't important.

 

What is! important

however is this.

 

Get out of my head

go on, fly free

butterfly...Ive used

you like you

did me.

 

You'll never admit

it was "using"

cause well...

thats such a harsh term.

 

Im a big girl, I can handle

stinging truths.

You're making my head hurt

I don't like that much.

You've somehow,

someway

opened up the floodgates

 

I haven't stopped thinking

since I woke up after a three

hour tour of my eyelids.

 

So.

Leave. Shoo....

Reviews

[Michael X]

There are a number of ways to look at this that blend perfectly into one humorous, intentive play on words itself, that represents pure poetry.
i love the whimsical progression and the mention of time. colorful imagery
andf punchlines the title is perfect

[alan khan]

i really am impressed and...refreshed by your writing style. its what i like. raw and just...different. good s**t.

[Forest Green]

Amber-unique; truth-telling in lines that swerve from deperate, sort of, to sweet-child-like. Tender and meaningful.

'Shoo'...truly, sweetly, final.

[Converse angel]

Great:)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

If you are shooing away that brilliant butterfly of a muse you have..she can flutter my way anytime! I'm one of those can't sleep people anyhow! lol