Just A Little More

Just A Little More

A Poem by Angelheaded Hipster
"

Funny how life goes...f*****g candle....

"

2010

A new decade

of my life

 

New decade, new life

new shoes, new loves

new writes.

 

You. You pushed me here.

You dont know this,

I wont tell you.

Youre under the assumption

we're still friends.

 

How can I be friends

when it hurts to hear

you ?

 

Eleven years

and some change

I thought of you,

dreamt of you

and

I should have

taken it when

I had the chance.

 

You want an encore

you say...

 

goddess

altar

fire

dangerous

 

You were right

you know.

And look where I am

Im in a mood....

its a 5 am burst.

 

I dont burst at 5 am.

Everyone knows this.

Im a 3 am kinda girl,

but you spun

me

and I tried to be happy

I am happy for you

 

But its not right.

She shouldnt get what

she wants so quick.

Make her wait

 

Eleven years.

 

© 2010 Angelheaded Hipster


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You always amaze me. You are able to pour out your soul in honesty and rake fingernails across the chalkboard of my heart...it gives me shivers and sets my teeth on edge! That's poetry! (Stands and applauds)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel like this about stories sometimes. Most of them leave me alone after a while, but some hang around and give no peace. But I am very bad for them as I can never give them their head.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is damned good . . . I suspect you know that already

Posted 14 Years Ago


amazingley written :) good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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